HiSET Language Arts Writing Practice Test 1

Question 1

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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For homes in typically colder geographic regions

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For people in homes in typically colder geographic regions

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For homes in typically cold geographic regions

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People in typically colder geographic regions

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Homes in typically colder geographic regions

Question 2

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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and napkins from the coffee shop, but no gloves.

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and there were a few napkins from the coffee shop, but no gloves.

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and there were a few napkins from the coffee shop, but not any gloves.

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and napkins from the coffee shop, no gloves were there.

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and napkins from the coffee shop, there were no gloves.

Question 3

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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understand global warming but also to prevent its growth.

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understand global warming and also to prevent it.

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understand global warming but also to prevent it.

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understand global warming yet also to prevent it.

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understand global warming yet also to prevent it’s growth.

Question 4

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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laugh when the sheriff throws his mug.

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laughed when the sheriff throws his mug.

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laugh when the sheriff threw his mug.

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laughed whenever the sheriff throws his mug.

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laugh when the sheriff will throw his mug.

Question 5

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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Alumni who have worked hard since graduation and now consider themselves successful usually look forward to high school reunions.

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High school reunions are usually looked forward to by alumni that have worked hard since graduation and now consider themselves successful.

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High school reunions are usually looked forward to by alumni who have worked hard since graduation and now consider themselves successful.

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Alumnus that have worked hard since graduation and now consider themselves successful usually look forward to high school reunions.

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High school reunions are usually looked forward to by alumni that have worked hard since graduation and now consider yourselves successful.

Question 6

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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Yesterday I fell down the stairs and then

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Yesterday I fell down the stairs, I

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I fell down the stairs yesterday, I

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After I fell down the stairs yesterday; I

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Falling down the stairs; I

Question 7

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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making student’s valuables susceptible to theft

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which makes student’s valuables susceptible to theft

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that makes student’s valuables susceptible to theft

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that makes students’ valuables susceptible to theft

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making students’ valuables susceptible to theft

Question 8

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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the terrified couple spotted a building that looked safe.

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Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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a safe looking building was spotted by the terrified couple.

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the terrified couple's luck changed when they spotted a safe looking building.

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their fear subsided somewhat when the terrified couple would spot a safe looking building.

Question 9

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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have been increasingly effecting

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has been increasingly effecting

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have been increasingly affecting

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will be increasingly effecting

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will be increasingly affecting

Question 10

Determine whether the underlined portion of the sentence below is correct or whether it needs to be revised.

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therefore

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however

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nevertheless

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and

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yet